Friday, April 14, 2017

Ma's Perspective

            The novel Room features a unique perspective of narration. The main character and narrator is Jack, a five year old who has grown up his entire life in an eleven by eleven foot room. Emma Donoghue’s choice to have Jack as the narrator brings many features to the book. The brokenness of Jack’s thoughts and his incorrect grammar clearly demonstrate the fact that he is five years old. This promotes a closer connection between Jack and the reader whereas a narration from Ma’s perspective could have painted Jack as a side character. His thoughts not only point to his age but also show that he has been isolated from the world. He describes everything from an objective viewpoint. Because of this, the reader sees both how he thinks and plot elements in an interesting way.

            The most important aspect of reading Room from Jack’s perspective is understanding how much of an effect growing up in isolation has had on his mentality. At the beginning of the novel, he does not know of any existence outside of “Room”. Because of the lies Ma had to tell him, he has trouble distinguishing from fiction and reality. The obscureness of his mindset would be impossible to capture from any perspective except his own. Even though Ma knows practically everything about Jack, she is not able to see things from his point of view. Knowing the way Jack approaches the world makes all his feats stunningly impressive.

            Although I do agree with the decision to narrate the novel from Jack’s irreplaceable perspective, I think that it is interesting to consider the novel from Ma’s perspective. The section titled “Dying” features Jack’s daring escape from Old Nick as he runs out into a world he has never encountered and a loneliness apart from Ma that instills an alarming distress in him. However, the escape is just as much a heroic expedition for Ma as for Jack. Ma is the orchestrator of the escape and has partially been planning the escape for the seven years she has been trapped in “Room”. The escape captures Ma’s bravery because, unlike Jack, she knows the grave consequences of failure.

Ma’s perspective is a much bleaker and gloomy presentation of their predicament, without the delusional optimism and never-ending excitement of a five year old child. The differences between Ma and Jack’s mentalities are apparent throughout the entire book and demonstrated with clarity when they are planning their Plan B escape. Jack is practicing pretending to be dead, but he keeps breaking out into giggles. To Jack, pretending to be dead is not easily distinguished from playing dead in their game “Corpse”. It is hard for him to separate games from real life. The scene from Ma’s perspective would undoubtedly include her musings over the consequences of their actions. She knows how unstable of a condition Old Nick is in and how easily the escape plan could fail. To Ma, Plan B is their last chance at escape and a matter of life and death.

Ma’s narration would also more extensively cover the realities of living in “Room”. Primarily in the earlier parts of the novel, Jack’s portrayals of their activities are skewed by his limited understanding of how they fit into the broader context of the world. From Jack’s perspective, every weekday they play a game called “Scream” where they shout at the top of their lungs towards the skylight. When reading this scene from Jack’s perspective, it is not quite clear what is going on at first. It eventually becomes clear that this is an attempt at attracting attention for escape. If this section were narrated by Ma, the reasoning behind this “game” would at once be clear. Ma’s narration would capture her sheer desperation.

The possibility that fascinates me the most about Ma’s narration is her portrayal of Old Nick. From Jack’s perspective, Old Nick is mysterious. At first, Jack is not even sure if Old Nick is human. Old Nick sways between the polar opposites of a god and a villain to Jack. Ma’s portrayal of Old Nick would provide readers with a much more detailed description of Old Nick. Our introduction to Old Nick would be as a kidnapper, rather than a mythical present bearer. Ma knows a lot about Old Nick’s life through their seven years of conversations that is not provided to the reader.

5 comments:

  1. When you say that Ma's narration would cover the realities of living in Room better I have to disagree because I feel like Jack's naivety provides a contrast that i think shows much better the reality of Room. Life in an 11x11 room seems much more shocking to me when we see it from the perspective of someone who knows nothing else. Specifically, his confusion at Ma's negative perception of Room shows me just how hard this has to be for Ma.

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    1. I may have worded my idea poorly, but I agree with what you are saying. Everything is much more striking from Jack's perspective because of how obscurely he describes them. What I meant to say was that Ma's narration would have made basic plot elements and features of life in room easier to understand. When we first start the book, we do not know why Ma and Jack are in room. This would have been very clear from Ma's narration. Emma Donoghue made the choice to use Jack and I think that it the way he describes things brings a lot to the book, but Ma's narration would just be more clear with what is going on.

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  2. It would be interesting to read the story from Ma's perspective. It would certainly be much less disorienting at the beginning, as Ma speaks the same language that we speak, while Jack speaks his own language. However, I think one of the advantages of Jack's perspective is that we can actually understand his perspective, as it is so different from our own. We get a picture of what Ma is feeling through Jack's point of view because she is much easier to understand to us. Jack's viewpoints are completely foreign to us at first, so trying to understand how Jack is feeling through Ma would be much more difficult than the other way around.

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  3. It seems that the entire story would be much more unclear if narrated from Ma's perspective, as after living in the same room for so many years, many of the minute aspects of room and made-up games that Ma plays with Jack would become very monotonous over time. Rather than narrating every single activity that Ma and Jack participate in within Room just as Jack does due to his curiosity as a 5-year old, it is likely that Ma's narration would be a lot more dreary and fraught with depression. This would make it a lot harder to understand the situation that the two are in, especially on those particular days when Ma is "Gone."

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  4. It's interesting to me how the author chooses to narrate from Jack's perspective because it is really one that none of us can relate to at all. We cannot fathom only having lived in a garden shed with only one other person for our entire lives, but at the same time, it makes sense to not tell the story from Ma's view. Though Ma's perspective is probably one that we could all relate to better, there is probably so much going through her head and so much in her past that the book would probably be unreadable. I can't imagine the author trying to encapsulate Ma's experience in her own words: the story would end up too cheesy and watered down or way too dark and emotionally heavy.

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